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by ~alfonsomarin
Princess Forever 3 English VerPrincess Forever: Chapter 3: Adventure in the Garden By Alfonso Marin A week had passed since Vanity disappeared. The police kept looking for clues about her whereabouts and apparently witness assured that she leaved the party. But Jodie couldn’t simply believe it. So she decided to come back to the last place where Vanity was seen. “I’m telling you Jodie, this is a total waste of time” - exclaimed Ellen a bit bothered. “Oh? Really? Then why did you bring me here in your car?” For a moment Ellen couldn’t answer her “Well because… I don’t want you disappear aPrincess Forever 3 English Ver
by ~alfonsomarin
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The red ballet boots part 2An hour and a half had passed after Nancy trapped herself in the red boots. The teenager had found an old and rusty hayfork and was using it to break the locks on her ankles. Suddenly, one of the points of the hayfork broke in half. Nancy looked at the utensil unable to believe it.The red ballet boots part 2
Nancy in rage threw the hayfork to the wood floor of the stable. The other point of the fork was all bended. Nancy sat over the haystacks and lowered her face. Moments later, she began to sob as tears fell over the floor between her feet. Nancy had given up hope to free herself.
“What I’m going to do?” Nancy said
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