Need a Proof ReaderI need someone to help me proof read the text I'm writing. I've been working on many ideas and when I try to translate them to English I have the feeling that they are not correct.
I promise not to bother much to anyone would help me.
Please!
~alfonsomarin
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Princess Forever 3 English VerPrincess Forever: Chapter 3: Adventure in the Garden By Alfonso Marin A week had passed since Vanity disappeared. The police kept looking for clues about her whereabouts and apparently witness assured that she leaved the party. But Jodie couldn’t simply believe it. So she decided to come back to the last place where Vanity was seen. “I’m telling you Jodie, this is a total waste of time” - exclaimed Ellen a bit bothered. “Oh? Really? Then why did you bring me here in your car?” For a moment Ellen couldn’t answer her “Well because… I don’t want you disappear aPrincess Forever 3 English Ver
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Author's Notes: Special thanks to spudz and Felnaari for the ideas and the proof reading
Lisa was practicing hard. The change in training from the 100m race to the 800m was quite a challenge, but she really had no need to worry, the only thing she needed to develop was endurance. But not many members of the athletic team were happy about Lisa "The 100m Star" trying to fill the expectations for an event that she could manage.
One day Lisa was training hard for the state eliminatory event. She was sure she could qualify. Suddenly Lisa's attention was drawn by the sound of clapping hands, in a
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